牛津译林版九年级英语复习素材：作文专项

九年级英语专项写作案

复习目标：

了解书面表达的考查要求，提高学生使用语言表达的综合运用能力。

Activity One:Important points

Step One：如何写好一篇作文：

 1.审题：时态（注意混合时态），段落（注意各段比重，特别是“我的观点”自由表达部分，不能太单薄（至少2个观点），而且要语句通顺、清晰。写好开头与结尾。）

 2.句子表达地道、清晰，一句一句写清楚。（注意标点规范，大、小写规范）

A句与B句用恰当的连词连接，段落上要注意层次性。

如：Write a recommend letter to our principal

First , Simon is hardworking……..

Second, it’s a kind of him……

3. 层次清晰、流畅最重要。

   A, 为避免句子单调、乏味，可使句子多样话。如不定式作目的状语：

    To prevent such things from happening, we should learn to save energy in our daily life.

B，可做必要的添加。如森林滥砍滥伐，“Large numbers of trees are being cut down +(and the forests are disappearing fast……)

C, 用好转承自然的过渡词：过渡词在文章中起着承上启下的作用，它好比一座桥梁，能将全文各句有机地联系在一起，从而使句子不再是孤立的独立的个体。 使用表示转折，并列，递进，因果关系等连词把句子连接起来，使全文结构紧凑，使上下文更加通顺，逻辑性更强。

英语中用于句与句之间、段与段之间常见的衔接词或短语有：

并列类：and, so, not only…but also…, neither…nor… as well as

转折类：but, however,

递进类：even, besides, what’s more, what’s worse, to make things even worse

时序类：first, next, then, shortly after, finally, meanwhile, at the same time

强调类： especially, indeed, at least, at most

例证类：for example, such as, like, in one’s opinion, that’s to say

对比类：on the other hand, while , although, though, even if ,even though

因果类：thanks to, because, as a result, so , so that

总结类：in a word, in short, all in all, generally speaking

D，不熟悉的不要硬翻，找相近的替代。中英文表达有很大差异，要灵活选择地道的英语表达。

4.每段主题清晰

Step Two：书面表达万能词句：

词：As we all know…（开头）  there is no doubt that….  What’s more……              on the other hand…              Firstly……secondly……thirdly……. Finally…..

however….     so that………,   in order to……,     so ….. that……

Generally speaking…..(总结, 结尾 )        In my opinion……..

句：1. Many people haven’t realized the importance of …..

Everyone should understand the importance of …….(结尾)

2.It句型。 It is +adj +for/ of sb to do sth.

3.It has a good/bad effect on…..

4.More attention should be paid to doing sth…

We should pay more attention to doing…

5.More action should be taken to do….

We should take more action to do….

6. If everyone try their best…, the life/ our health/ wild animals/ our environment ..will…

Step Three：作文话题：

1.环保： （雾霾，光盘行动，地球一小时，动植物保护，节水，世界环境日,低碳生活（Lower carbon, happier life……）

2.社会公德：（创建文明城市，家乡的变化（changes to my hometown）

3.学生成长：（Ss’ development）（身心健康，压力问题，学校生活，终生学习，假期计划，中考打算，毕业前为学校做什么，与人相处，快乐生活，文明礼仪……）

4.旅游：（travelling）参观某地，旅游注意事项，带人参观（家乡景点介绍），暑期打算……

5.新生事物评点：电脑、上网、手机、机器人利弊谈等。

6.全民健康：学生身心健康，饮食健康，身体锻炼……

四：范文归类：

(1)关于环境保护问题, 典型例句：
1. It’s our duty to save water. /It’s our duty to love and protect our environment。
2. As we know , water is very important to man./ we can’t live without water.

3. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.
4. It is very important to take care of our environment.
5. But some people don’t care about it./ They waste a lot of water in their daily life.
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted./Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthilyin the future.
8. We should not throw litter onto the ground.(文明礼仪)
9. If everyone can try their best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
10. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我们不节约用水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。)

范文： 保护环境

例：最近我们南通环境变得越来越糟糕，环境污染越发严重……。假如你是学生Jane,你校要进行“How to Protect Our Environment?”专题演讲比赛，要求包括以下内容：

环境现状	1.周围环境日趋严重     2.白色污染随处可见 3.最近几年来在中国许多地区出现了雾霾天气(hazy weather)
采取措施	1.出行尽量不要自己开车，而是坐公交车或骑自行车。 2.阻止工厂把废弃物排入河中来减少水污染。 3.我们不应该使用一次性（disposable）盘子，碗。 4.我们还应该 ……(至少两点)

注意：1）文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2）第五要点需用2到3句话做适当发挥。

3）词数80左右。

Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:（演讲稿:环保、低碳）

I ’m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.

As we all know,                                                       

                                                                          

                                                                          

                                                                          

                                                                          

In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.

“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!

范文：

Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:（演讲稿:环保、低碳）

I ’m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. We can see white pollution everywhere. There has been hazy weather in many parts of China in recent years. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment?

For example（first）, we can try to take a bus or ride bikes instead of driving by ourselves . We should prevent factories from dumping the waste into rivers to reduce water pollution. We shouldn’t use disposable plates, bowls. when we go shopping we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags. and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.

In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.

“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!

（2）健康问题

1. It is very importantfor usto keep healthy。/ How can we keep healthy?
2. To keep healthy, we should not only eat the food healthilybut alsodo more exercise。
3. I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
4. There is an old saying: “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”
5. Either study or work is based on strong body.身体是革命的本钱
6. We should achieve a balance between study and exercises to keep us healthy.
7. 7. Health is very important to us teenagers.
8. 8. Health is far more important than money.
9. 9. Good health can help us enjoy our life while poor health leads to nothing.
10. 10. Staying up late at night is bad for our health.

江苏省教育厅公布的2013年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化，请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发布自己的观点。

现状	大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因	(1) 睡眠不足; (2) 长时间看书、写作业、用电脑等
预防方法	(1) 做眼保健操，多进行体育活动； (2) 养成正确的用眼习惯 (3) ……
你的观点	……（至少两点）

注意：

• 词数100字左右。开头已经写好，不计入总数；
• 内容必须包括上表中的要点，并作必要地发挥;
• 条理清楚，语句连贯；
• 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名信息。

参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted  近视眼 short eyesight

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.At present, about 70 percent students are shortsighted. Here are some reasons. First of all,many students don’t have enough sleep. Second,some students read books for too long time, others do too much homework and use computers a lot.

However, short eyesight can be prevented.We should do more exercises and play more sports. We are also supposed to have a right habit of using our eyes.

In my opinion, it is important to protect our eyes. We should have a break when using them too much.We should protect our eyes well so that we can see the colourful world.

（3）学生成长问题：

1.Today we are all proud of our school, tomorrow we will be the pride of our school!

2.I’m sure if you try your best, you will make great progress.

3. With the teacher’s help, he studies very hard and gets on well with his classmates now.

例: 请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

背景	1.认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的 2.走向社会后没有感恩意识 3. 行为方式令人担忧
学会感恩	1.感谢社会提供良好的教育机会 2.感谢父母…… 3.感谢老师…… 4…….

小词典：enter society进入社会 sense of thanks 感恩意识

要求：1．短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数：90词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3．演讲稿中不得提及所在学校及本人姓名。

Good morning, boys and girls!  The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”…          ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your listening!

范文：

Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. Because of society, we can have a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.

In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our country more beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!

（4）新生事物：

2013年双11淘宝交易额突破350亿元，随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章并阐述自己的观点。

 

注意：1．所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；

3．词数：90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词汇：商品goods。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

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Activity 2: Do Exercise

Activity 3: Summary

Activity 4：Homework（完成训练题）